United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Incredible use of dialougue to tell a story. I wonder what happened between them...
Whatever, I like the sense of wonder I'm getting from this so I'm not going to try to figure it out. Good job!
I really enjoyed your story. I get drawn to such stories about creepy old houses haunted by ghosts and zombies every now and then. Well done.
I loved this! Feeling like the place you used to know is suddenly something entirely different is very relatable. When something drastic happens, it can change your perspective entirely. I love how this story emphasizes that. Well done ðŸ‘
Keep up the good job my friend!
Wow hit the nail on the head on this one. I have this dilemma too. All I can do is write it here hoping they will come across my story one day.
Ooh~ I like the mystery revolved around this! Why did he leave? What does "leave" even mean in this context? Why would Kol give him away? So many questions, I love it! Good job :)
