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Thomas Ray

ThomastheRay is from US United States • 22 y/o • Male

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NorthernPhoenix
NorthernPhoenix reviewed Dear ________

Cheesy? Maybe just a bit, but mostly because that's the way of things, I think. I absolutely love this. You've managed to capture perfectly the way that I've felt many times. This story is beautifully written and conveys so much emotion without being overbearing and wordy. Thanks for sharing it!

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Sentimental_creature
♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥ reviewed Hey, Future Me?

this hits me but not terribly deep

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hercules
hercules reviewed Zaire

Everything is great as it is. I loved reading it. Well done.

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hercules
hercules reviewed Meandering

I enjoyed your story. Well done.

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hercules
hercules reviewed Hey, Future Me?

I really enjoyed your story. It has meaning. Well done.

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IanG
IanG reviewed Hey, Future Me?

The wave metaphore is a good one.
Most people are going through big changes at eighteen, whether its university or your first job. Its understandable to feel worried about that. Just because things are rough now it doesn't mean they always will be. If one plan or ambition doesn't work out then another one might. The pandemic is making things hard now, but sooner or later society will come to terms with it. it may not be easy but if people couldn't get past crisis our species would've gone extinct long before now.

There was a recession when I was a teenager. Sometimes it seemed it would never end but it did. I was unemployed for a time but I found a good job, even though it took me years.

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lyngbakr82
𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚 reviewed Hey, Future Me?

I really feel this right now. Good job putting it into words. The boat analogy made a strong mental image.

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lyngbakr82
𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚 reviewed Tragedies

I really enjoyed the first couple of paragraphs about tragedy. Loren's mental dialogue is interesting to watch. Can't wait to read more :)

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