United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this. I loved the characters and the way you wrote the whole scene. It was quite delightful!
One hundred percent felt that "you definitely know my sister" part. I like the mood of this story, the simplicity of it that explores the passing of strangers in a person's life.
aMaZiNg!! i really loved how at the end you said "the boy in the blue t-shirt" it really made it kind of mysterious. but i also enjoyed how its like a letter. KEEP WRITING!! :P
I enjoyed your poem. Well done.
I'm too young to know what love is like but I think I have experienced it. In couples. I have never dated anyone. I too have only ever had childish crushes. This is what it was like with one but not as intense. I hope that one day everyone will find the love of their life. I know I perfer hot, British men but who knows?
I'm not really sure what to say about this. Writing-wise, I like how it's all dialogue. I love how the tone of each voice shifts at the end.
It also made me feel sad. I couldn't quite relate to all the details, but I could definitely relate to the overall idea and feel.
It's wonderful writing, and you've given me something to think about.
Sometimes keeping someone secret can be a burden. I had a friend that I liked a lot but found out a dark secret they didn’t know I knew. Till this day I’ve kept it a secret because I didn’t want to hurt their feelings for knowing it. Was I wrong to do so?
Nice^^ it feels like i'm the one who said the coward thing HIHI~~