United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
this rhyming! it spoke right to my heart. keep at it! i can't wait to see what you write next
Ooh, I actually really like this! It sounds like it should be a song.
I really feel this right now. Good job putting it into words. The boat analogy made a strong mental image.
this hits me but not terribly deep
This story sounds like the beginning of something brilliant! I was a little confused as it progressed, but idrc, it'll probably make more sense later on. I can't wait to read more!
And congratulations on your accomplishments!!! 🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈🎉🎊🎈
A relatable slice of life ðŸ‘ðŸ‘
Keep it up ðŸ˜
Keep up the good job my friend!
I loved this! Feeling like the place you used to know is suddenly something entirely different is very relatable. When something drastic happens, it can change your perspective entirely. I love how this story emphasizes that. Well done ðŸ‘