United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Amazing
Sounds good so far, but this was very strange. I already guessed about her being important, but I'm confused on the voices. They like Lu and Blue (it rhymes) and shes the key to Ren. It may just be my head wanting a romance, but I'm begining to think those two have a little something for each other. I'm probably wrong though. She's a strong girl who zones out a lot and I'm curious on what the true motives of those voices are. It's quite strange. I wanna read more and finish this mystery!!
Um, did I miss something or is the boy still unnamed?
i am speechless
this is really good! one thing; "first, the allarm bells began," i don't think alarm has two L's. XD not sure if you meant to do that
You did a really good job of keeping the action going the entire time. It was interesting to get inside the thief's mind. The cliffhanger at the end left me wanting to read more. Great job :)
wow.
It's kind of funny. I don't really ask this question that much, so I can't tell you if I believe in God, gods, or god, with a lower case. I think people that believe that there is someone out there that is watching them are good, since they will try not to commit sins, and everybody can be happy and relatively didn't make bad mistakes.
Anyway, its a good question.