United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Cheesy? Maybe just a bit, but mostly because that's the way of things, I think. I absolutely love this. You've managed to capture perfectly the way that I've felt many times. This story is beautifully written and conveys so much emotion without being overbearing and wordy. Thanks for sharing it!
I've been here. It sucks.
I don't think I would call it cheesy; the speaker has a sense of self-awareness that keeps it from being over the top, without taking away from the emotion of the story, which personally I felt very strongly. It has good flow. Great work!
I'm too young to know what love is like but I think I have experienced it. In couples. I have never dated anyone. I too have only ever had childish crushes. This is what it was like with one but not as intense. I hope that one day everyone will find the love of their life. I know I perfer hot, British men but who knows?
I'm not really sure what to say about this. Writing-wise, I like how it's all dialogue. I love how the tone of each voice shifts at the end.
It also made me feel sad. I couldn't quite relate to all the details, but I could definitely relate to the overall idea and feel.
It's wonderful writing, and you've given me something to think about.
I enjoyed your poem. Well done.
Nice^^ it feels like i'm the one who said the coward thing HIHI~~
