United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
As with the first part, you evoke your characters' emotions well.
Incredible use of dialougue to tell a story. I wonder what happened between them...
Whatever, I like the sense of wonder I'm getting from this so I'm not going to try to figure it out. Good job!
Holy heck. I feel like my entire life in regards to other people has been summarized here. I kinda consider myself to be an invisible person, and this just... words.
Good writing.
I really enjoyed your story. I get drawn to such stories about creepy old houses haunted by ghosts and zombies every now and then. Well done.
Sometimes keeping someone secret can be a burden. I had a friend that I liked a lot but found out a dark secret they didn’t know I knew. Till this day I’ve kept it a secret because I didn’t want to hurt their feelings for knowing it. Was I wrong to do so?
I've had this problem before. Honestly I don't have any idea what the best course of action is when wanting to say something but being afraid of what will happen if you do, but this certainly captures the uncertainty of the situation.