It's brave to share this opinion. Looking at the reviews is kind of funny because most of them are people agreeing with you, and those reviews are downvoted to -4 or some such number, and it just amuses me that they're completely silent but still feel spiteful and angry enough to do that.
Guys, if you're reading this, just learn to deal with other people having and expressing opinions that are different than yours.
Simple and a bit nostalgic. I like
Literal perfection, this.
I have no words, this is incredibly well written.
This one for me feeling nostalgic. Well done
I definitely agree that this is half musing. I'm not sure exactly why, but I had a hard time latching on to a single emotion while reading. It moved very quickly from thought to thought.
There were some really good lines though! Definitely worth reading.
I feel like this could be a song... Makes me wish I knew how to compose...
I had a bit of a hard time finding the rhythm of the piece, but it's far from bad. I like it.