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Thomas Ray

United States • 22 y/o • Male

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Reviews Given

A Breath of Kindness by NorthernPhoenix

I... I don't know what to say. I'm speechless.

3 Apr, 2021 0 Edit Delete

Fear Just Isn't Her Color by NorthernPhoenix

I want this to be an animated short film

31 Mar, 2021 0 Edit Delete

First Light by NorthernPhoenix

You SHOULD be proud of this. I don't have words to explain how it makes me feel.

30 Mar, 2021 0 Edit Delete

What We Didn't Have by

I like this a lot. I love when poems tell stories.

29 Mar, 2021 0 Edit Delete

Made me chuckle inside

22 Mar, 2021 0 Edit Delete

Forgive Me, Will You? by lime

I'm so impressed. How does one write poetry like this?

7 Mar, 2021 0 Edit Delete

Life's a Game by

Wow that tone shift halfway through was brutal. This hit me hard.

7 Mar, 2021 2 Edit Delete

Perfectly by AaronTheRocker

This makes me think of a book I've been reading, "12 Rules For Life" by Jordan Peterson. One of the rules he suggests is "Compare yourself to who you were yesterday, not to who someone else is today." We're all extremely flawed, and comparing ourselves to other people (or worse, comparing them to us) doesn't help anyone improve.

6 Mar, 2021 1 Edit Delete

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