United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Given
This is so good! Upload more please.
Michael and Avery already have a dynamic I know I'll love. Oh, and the writing feels professional enough to make me feel like I'm reading a published e-book.
I don't have to question how I feel about this. I just love it.
This is believable. Keep up your writing, I want more.
Angels..... Hmm.... I like this.
YES!!!!! I love this!
Wow, that took a turn. I love it. I can't help but wonder what happens to them next. I do feel like the writing could use a little more showing than telling, but the characters feel individual, and I like all three of them, and while it hints at a larger story, leaving it here still satisfies me.
My thoughts are all over the place right now...
I like this one. You did a really good job at writing it, and believe me, you are not the only one who hates their own writing. Keep up the good work!
Wow. Something about the way you write hits me so hard, and the emotion you've poured onto the page. . . I feel it.
"The irony with life is that those who wear masks often tell more truths that those with open faces."
-The Rose Society, by Marie Lu