Reviews Given
We never saw emotion. All we saw was him handing the gun over, not even a hint of why. It's not necessarily a problem, just something I noticed. It does let us project ourselves onto both characters though, and that's actually pretty powerful.
I don't understand completely, but I really like this.
What instantly sprung to my mind was "is there really nothing I can do? Is there nothing people can do to help others?"
And sometimes, there isn't anything. But other times, there are ways, even if they're just small things, to better other people's lives.
So many holes in the world
I'm not sure what this made me feel... But I like it!
I like this.
Nice. Great smilies. Metaphors? I get the two mixed up....