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you did a good job at writing this story.
I love this!! Write more!!
This is a really good piece! Like Justice_Arabia said, you captured all my emotions in one
You are a really good writer!! You know how to leave people at the edge of their seats.
I loved this!! I love the detail and everything else about this story! Good job
you are really good!!!
please write more! :)
You are getting better every time I read something by you!
I absolutely LOVE it!! Continue writing please!