United States • 26 y/oReviews Received
Yasssssssss! I love it
This is honestly outstanding. The way it is written, the way it is explained, everything is just genius. I know it hurts when someone breaks you heart but what is essential is that you got passed it and managed to get over him or her. Who needs them? Look at you! You are so successful in your writing and in much much more. If they didn't like you for who you are then screw them! They are blind! Because I am 100 % SURE that ANYONE would be so very lucky to be with an individual like you. I may not know you, but you seem pretty nice and caring. Don't change.
Inspirational for sure. I really liked the way this was written!
this is amazing i wish i could be strong as you eveyone thinks that i am breav but i am not . even tho that was amazing wish you luk and good jod
This is deeeeep, is it personal?
Great that you expressed this.
A good poem which was, for me, spoiled by the use of unnecessary expletives. The use of such words can be a powerful tool when used sparingly. Three times in five sentences is overkill...
Overall, a nice effort.
I have read all of your work so far.. and it's pretty depressing!
I understand the need to express oneself through writing. It's often helpful and has proven to be therapeutic.. However, I'm not so sure that posting so much deep personal pain is really the right way to go...
Interestingly, if you turned your mind to more interesting and positive topics, you have the capacity to write very good poems (and perhaps stories as well?). You have a nice way with words and a good manner of expression. I'm sure there is a lighter and more upbeat side to you that is just bursting to be set free.
Go on, give yourself a chance! :-)