United States • 19 y/o • MaleReviews Received
WOW! Very Int story I took time to read this story and I was really enjoying it thanks for making this beautiful story in this site it deserves five Stars keep up the good job!
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Seems really interesting, can't wait for the next part. However, when a new character talks you should put a new paragraph bc my eyes were going mad trying to figure out who was who and saying what. Otherwise, good job.
How do you know? What about your feelings can't a girl feel?
Your writing skills are awesome! Everything is understandable as well, I really enjoyed the final product as said below, and I wanted to say you’d be a good writer in the future! Keep it up, work hard to achieve, be you, be safe. Peace!
Ooooo- a cliffhanger? Reeee! This was getting good! I can’t wait to see the next part! Have a nice day, be you, stay safe! Peace.
I really enjoyed this story! Keep up the work, and I can’t wait to see more of this! Again, keep up the work! Have a nice day, be you, be safe, peace!
