Zack

Its beautiful you cheese ball

I loved it!

Kade i seriously could feel your emotions in this its really well written and im so sorry that you feel this way..

Your writing skills are awesome! Everything is understandable as well, I really enjoyed the final product as said below, and I wanted to say you’d be a good writer in the future! Keep it up, work hard to achieve, be you, be safe. Peace!

Your such a good writer! This is amazing. Just a tip for future writing. When writing one line of speech, and wanting to do a second one add more description around, so it's more of a narrative, and it'll be a future skill for writing. Other than that, great. Will there be part 4?

You know ill always be there for you, Ill be with you til the end :D

Everything will be okay. I believe in you and will always be here for you.

Your amazing at poems, don't think that. By the way, if you've posted this on the 29th of April, why did it take this long for it to become public? That's weird. Nevertheless, your talented, kee writing.