Zack

good job bro

Great story, I cannot wait to read more of your work.

Nicely done

I liked the story BEsTie :)

this was extremely well written, keep writing!! :)

I think if you explained it to your mom she would try to understand, I believe in you. Keep on writing, I love reading your work

It's really hard to feel like you're not seen. I'm sorry you have to experience those deeply painful emotions.

Your worth isn't defined by the opinions of others, and I know how hard that is to grasp when it's your own mother, but try to take heart. There's always light.

Pretty good writing for the topic and audience. I would suggest adding more details and digging deeper into pulling those out of yourself and onto paper, but deeply personal ones like this are always more about what you think of them- just a little suggestion.

Very EpIC