Zack

so sad....I LIKE IT!

yes, You go live like a boy! And never give up!

This is really good, you're very smart. I'm glad that someone can point that out because I find it a problem, even at home. My siblings know that I want to be a boy, but one of them is contently saying, "But you're a girl. You're not a dude, so stop acting like it." It can be hard and I try to explain it, but then my mom overhears and gets mad, so thank you. People NEED to start understanding this.

Absolutely lovely!

great!

I really like this poem. Great job!

wish I had that kind of relationship with my siblings... I guess I ask for too much.

Yay! I really liked the original. This is nice too.