Zack

You're really good at writing songs.

I'm rushing to read the next part! *thumbs up*

hOLy CheEEsSEE ! That's- wow- ....she really did that???

this is good :)

that's beautiful man

how do you write this good!?

I think a part 2 would be pretty cool :)

yay for part 2! it was indeed short and sweet :D