Zip017

Wow this is really good!

Awesomely fantastic

I enjoyed reading this. decent flow and little problems with reading it, couple of spelling/grammer things I noticed,
Was the way you worded line 24 going top to bottom or line 25 going bottom to top intentional? I had to reread it a few times to make sure I read it right
Also I understand what you are talking about
Great job and keep writing!

I used to think the same way and so does someone close to me;beautifully explained.
If you ever need any help just ask out.

I hate talking to people about my... Problems. Just like you said, I don't understand it myself, so why should they? Why should I trust them with knowledge about my thoughts and feelings when I don't tell even my closest friends?

What a creepy vibe but I like it that way. Ghost isn't something that should be always feared but it is good to.