Lyn

will take me ages to figure out-
wont even try
im not saying bc its bad-
because my detctive skills are bad

This story idea is really cool. I like the descriptive words you used. Great job! :)

i don't even remember writing this, but apparently, it was originally my idea. in that case, you wrote this so well you can keep the concept! XD i love your description of mc's inner thoughts, and this is so cool aaá

I really enjoyed this story too. Well done.

I wish I could write this well :( you’re so talented

ur talented. better than i thought....let's say our wriitng career will turn out interesting..