This is beautiful! Good for you for having the courage to walk away like that. Remember, every bad experience teaches us something. Thank you for sharing this.
It’s a shame, really. That we lie to ourselves like that. Great storyline though. It made me sad :(
I loved this! Feeling like the place you used to know is suddenly something entirely different is very relatable. When something drastic happens, it can change your perspective entirely. I love how this story emphasizes that. Well done 👍
Nooo, i dont want my imaginary friends to fade. Writing about them shall keep them alive >:3
A lovely story, though. I think it might sound better if the imaginary friend acted as a child might, though. Instead of calling Timothy "dear," try calling him "buddy" or something. there were a few grammatical mistakes, but those are easily overlooked. Over all, it was pretty good! I enjoyed reading it :)
Ooh~ I like the mystery revolved around this! Why did he leave? What does "leave" even mean in this context? Why would Kol give him away? So many questions, I love it! Good job :)
Yes, that is what I would do,
If I were an author.
I enjoyed this. I liked how you said they went for “the ghastly kill.” That topped it off nicely. Thanks for sharing.
I really enjoyed this story! I love how you said the world of snow outside was her friend, that made me smile. I also liked how the cat's name was Leo. It's a name I have a guilty pleasure of seeing. Thanks for posting this!