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-Lynnyan- is from US United States • 13 y/o • Female

"It is perfectly okay to write garbage -- as long as you edit it brilliantly." - C.J. Cherryh

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Salt and Sugar by sidney

This is beautiful! Good for you for having the courage to walk away like that. Remember, every bad experience teaches us something. Thank you for sharing this.

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A Promise by NobodyImportant

It’s a shame, really. That we lie to ourselves like that. Great storyline though. It made me sad :(

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The New House by Thomas Ray

I loved this! Feeling like the place you used to know is suddenly something entirely different is very relatable. When something drastic happens, it can change your perspective entirely. I love how this story emphasizes that. Well done 👍

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Miss the Good Times by Jan Brooks

Nooo, i dont want my imaginary friends to fade. Writing about them shall keep them alive >:3
A lovely story, though. I think it might sound better if the imaginary friend acted as a child might, though. Instead of calling Timothy "dear," try calling him "buddy" or something. there were a few grammatical mistakes, but those are easily overlooked. Over all, it was pretty good! I enjoyed reading it :)

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Final Words, Written by Thomas Ray

Ooh~ I like the mystery revolved around this! Why did he leave? What does "leave" even mean in this context? Why would Kol give him away? So many questions, I love it! Good job :)

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If I Were an Author by supernova

Yes, that is what I would do,
If I were an author.

Beautiful <3

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THE WOODS of DOOM by hercules

I enjoyed this. I liked how you said they went for “the ghastly kill.” That topped it off nicely. Thanks for sharing.

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Amy's Discovery by Jan Brooks

I really enjoyed this story! I love how you said the world of snow outside was her friend, that made me smile. I also liked how the cat's name was Leo. It's a name I have a guilty pleasure of seeing. Thanks for posting this!

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