Please register or login to continue

Register Login

Lyn's Avatar

-Lynnyan-'s Profile

Lyn

-Lynnyan- is from US United States • 16 y/o • Female

I’m not back

Reviews Given

A Promise by NobodyImportant

It’s a shame, really. That we lie to ourselves like that. Great storyline though. It made me sad :(

0 Edit Delete
The New House by Thomas Ray

I loved this! Feeling like the place you used to know is suddenly something entirely different is very relatable. When something drastic happens, it can change your perspective entirely. I love how this story emphasizes that. Well done 👍

0 Edit Delete
Miss the Good Times by Jan Brooks

Nooo, i dont want my imaginary friends to fade. Writing about them shall keep them alive >:3
A lovely story, though. I think it might sound better if the imaginary friend acted as a child might, though. Instead of calling Timothy "dear," try calling him "buddy" or something. there were a few grammatical mistakes, but those are easily overlooked. Over all, it was pretty good! I enjoyed reading it :)

0 Edit Delete
Final Words, Written by Thomas Ray

Ooh~ I like the mystery revolved around this! Why did he leave? What does "leave" even mean in this context? Why would Kol give him away? So many questions, I love it! Good job :)

0 Edit Delete
If I Were an Author by supernova

Yes, that is what I would do,
If I were an author.

Beautiful <3

0 Edit Delete
THE WOODS of DOOM by hercules

I enjoyed this. I liked how you said they went for “the ghastly kill.” That topped it off nicely. Thanks for sharing.

0 Edit Delete
Amy's Discovery by Jan Brooks

I really enjoyed this story! I love how you said the world of snow outside was her friend, that made me smile. I also liked how the cat's name was Leo. It's a name I have a guilty pleasure of seeing. Thanks for posting this!

1 Edit Delete
What's for Dinner? by Michael Crawley

Yes. Just yes.

0 Edit Delete