Lyn

I loved it, you did a fantastic job tying it all together! I know I'm really late, but I just wanted to show my love for this. You have an amazing writing technique! I had a similar idea to write something like this, so it won't be exactly like yours, but it will have a similar ring to it. I hope that's alright with you because I'm already pretty far into the story. I just wanted you to know that I don't mean to steal your idea and I certainly won't be posting an exact replica of it.

I love the technique. The way you tied it together at the end is perfect. You're an amazing writer, I'm sorry I didn't give you this review earlier. I may not agree with what it's saying, but I can overlook that. A beautiful story filled with love <3

That's pretty funny! I think we all feel that way nowadays. You've brought a smile to my face, so thank you!

My heart-
Great job, I love your technique!

I'm not good at poetry and I haven't seen much about Dream SMP, but I think you did pretty good. Also, try using shift+enter when creating a stanza, then just use enter for a new stanza.

Great job! I know exactly what you wrote this for >:3 And, no, poems don't always have to rhyme.

Wow, a great example of being scared to be your true self around others. You're really great at poetry! I could never qwq
Keep writing, you're a champion!

Please continue this! I need to know what happened q^q