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-Lynnyan- is from US United States • 18 y/o • Female

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I'm Quitting by hvdiyya

how flippin dare you >:(((
you did get me tho-

q^q am I rly that gullible?

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The Future by Chantal

This is beautiful! I completely relate, and I know others do too! You did a great job with the way it sounds and how it rhymes. A wonderful poem, keep writing!

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My Mind by Black Sheep

Don't let your mind win. You are an incredible person, and if I can see that from across a screen it must be true. Brains can be annoying and complete buttholes sometimes, but you can't let yours get the best of you.
I wish you the best as you work through this. Keep going, you're worth it.

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Crying Alone in the Darkness by kayleeistwix

I really enjoyed this story! I have to admit, I expected that he was crushing on Jessica. But the part where he was stabbed caught me off-guard! There a few grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed. All in all, it was a great read! Keep writing :)

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Dialogue by Thomas Ray

Incredible use of dialougue to tell a story. I wonder what happened between them...
Whatever, I like the sense of wonder I'm getting from this so I'm not going to try to figure it out. Good job!

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The New House by Thomas Ray

I loved this! Feeling like the place you used to know is suddenly something entirely different is very relatable. When something drastic happens, it can change your perspective entirely. I love how this story emphasizes that. Well done 👍

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Angel in Disguise by Jan Brooks

This was awesome! I love the mystery around the old man. A couple mistakes, but those can easily be overlooked so no biggy.

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Amy's Discovery by Jan Brooks

I really enjoyed this story! I love how you said the world of snow outside was her friend, that made me smile. I also liked how the cat's name was Leo. It's a name I have a guilty pleasure of seeing. Thanks for posting this!

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