Lyn

omg, welcome back! i've missed our strange chats :)

This is so true! Mothers hold the family together. Great poem!

I think you did a great job! It really conveys the message well. Keep writing, you're very talented.

I loved this! Feeling like the place you used to know is suddenly something entirely different is very relatable. When something drastic happens, it can change your perspective entirely. I love how this story emphasizes that. Well done 👍

It’s a shame, really. That we lie to ourselves like that. Great storyline though. It made me sad :(

Beautiful! You're so talented <3

Is it just me, or do all villains have THE BEST backstories? I always feel like I can connect more with villains than with heroes because villains are imperfect and they know it. Heroes are always so stuck up, it's nice to see a main character that isn't like that. You go, girl!

Incredible! You did a brilliant job explaining your point! I believe that the true meaning of life is to make the most out of it, so this goes hand in hand with that. If you believe in yourself and push to overcome the challenges, you'll make the most out of life. It's always been okay to tell people what you need help with, and I'm so glad you included that! Another great piece of writing, Had!