Lyn

omg, welcome back! i've missed our strange chats :)

A nice cliché twist done a little differently, I really enjoyed reading this!

I enjoyed the mystery of waking up and not knowing what’s going on. There’s really only one thing that jumped out at me that you can improve on. When writing, try to discribe the world your creating a little bit more. For example, describe what the castle looked like as Elizabeth/Ashley brought Catherine/Madison inside. I think that’s it. All in all, it was really good! You’re off to a great start.

This is so true! Mothers hold the family together. Great poem!

Omg this hits way too close to home :(
But it’s nice to know that I’m not the only one struggling with these emotions. Good job writing them down like this, it’s really good!!

Yes. Just yes. The emotions and the way I can relate is just. Yes.

First of all, that painter needs therapy.
Second, when writing dialogue, create a new paragraph for each new person speaking.
and lastly, try not to switch point-of-view in the middle of the story. It gets confusing for the reader.

Please, dont give up! I enjoy reading and watching your progress and I would absolutely hate myself if one day you were just gone. Please, I'm begging you. I know you can get through this. You just have to stay strong. If you wont do it for yourself, do it for me. Please...