Lyn

In paragraph 29, I suggest fixing the quotations. I stopped reading right there to let you know, but I love the story so far!

Tears in my eyes T^T
Great story!

I"m practically in tears! Keep writing, it was beautiful. o(TヘTo)

Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous.
Every girl needs to find this letter hidden somewhere in their life. Thank you for sharing it <3

Omg i can see how you improved!!!

Woah, okay, Marquess Ravenswood seems a bit rude, but I'll let that slide. Why won't Dorian be kinder to his sister? It seems the only person who actually cares for her is Theodosia! I swear, boys are so complicated. I feel bad for Dorian, though. if he changed after the death of his mother, he must've had a strong bond with her. I hope I can learn more about Ravenswood in the next chapter. You had a few typos, as well, but I can't remember where, so maybe just go over your writing and fix them. It was a great story though, I'm still very intrigued!

This is so me. I'm sorry to say it, but it's true. I get so stressed over these things and I can't say much about it except "I'm stressed" and even when I do say it, it's more of in a joking way and no one catches on. But I feel you. You can talk to me if you need to.

Woah, so much emotion! I love the story you've tied together. Now I have to check out your other writings <3