Lyn

Wow, this was perfect. I like how you left off right there when he sees her again. But, I thought he had tried to, y'know, follow in Everli's footsteps. What exactly happened is what I wanna know. Great writing, tho!

This is really sweet, and I know that whoever your talking about will enjoy reading this. Good luck with 'em! ;)

The horrible tragedy of losing someone without getting to tell them you love them. It hurts. More than words can describe. But you captured that pain and wrote it down into words. Good job!

Interesting. I wonder what number 7 is referring to. You did a great job! I love how you wrote in lowercase, it gives the writing a more nonchalant feel, even if it's about death.

I think I saw something like this a while ago-
I dunno if that inspired it or not, but all in all it's a really good idea. Great job!

A gorgeous piece of writing. You did an incredible job, as always! I can't describe how thankful I am for you, Had!

This really spoke to my heart. You did a great job putting these emotions into words. I can't wait to read more of your works!

The tragedy of losing someone so very dear to you. It hurts and you showed that really well! I like how you changed up the style throughout the poem, it made it interesting to read. Great job!