Lyn

That last line is hilarious! You're very talented, I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Woah... I'm kinda late, but I can still show my love, right? This was amazing! No one ever kills the main character... I'll have to try it sometime. Great writing!

In paragraph 29, I suggest fixing the quotations. I stopped reading right there to let you know, but I love the story so far!

Tears in my eyes T^T
Great story!

I"m practically in tears! Keep writing, it was beautiful. o(TヘTo)

Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous.
Every girl needs to find this letter hidden somewhere in their life. Thank you for sharing it <3

Omg i can see how you improved!!!

Woah, okay, Marquess Ravenswood seems a bit rude, but I'll let that slide. Why won't Dorian be kinder to his sister? It seems the only person who actually cares for her is Theodosia! I swear, boys are so complicated. I feel bad for Dorian, though. if he changed after the death of his mother, he must've had a strong bond with her. I hope I can learn more about Ravenswood in the next chapter. You had a few typos, as well, but I can't remember where, so maybe just go over your writing and fix them. It was a great story though, I'm still very intrigued!