Lyn

This is so sad :( I hope you're doing alright. I'm here to talk if you wanna, just remember that.
The poem was really good, though! I love how you said that the father was a hero. That really put the oomph in it. I love how it's a story-poem, where the poem tells a story. You're very talented!

This is really sweet, and I know that whoever your talking about will enjoy reading this. Good luck with 'em! ;)

Wow, incredible! Absolutely worth the wait! I like how you made it a bit longer and added more suspense, it really influenced my reaction. Great job!

Wow, this was perfect. I like how you left off right there when he sees her again. But, I thought he had tried to, y'know, follow in Everli's footsteps. What exactly happened is what I wanna know. Great writing, tho!

Interesting. I wonder what number 7 is referring to. You did a great job! I love how you wrote in lowercase, it gives the writing a more nonchalant feel, even if it's about death.

The horrible tragedy of losing someone without getting to tell them you love them. It hurts. More than words can describe. But you captured that pain and wrote it down into words. Good job!

I think I saw something like this a while ago-
I dunno if that inspired it or not, but all in all it's a really good idea. Great job!

A gorgeous piece of writing. You did an incredible job, as always! I can't describe how thankful I am for you, Had!