Lyn

The tragedy of losing someone so very dear to you. It hurts and you showed that really well! I like how you changed up the style throughout the poem, it made it interesting to read. Great job!

I don't know what it is that you did, but I'd forgive you. And if whoever this is for is important, they will too.

This is beautiful! I completely relate, and I know others do too! You did a great job with the way it sounds and how it rhymes. A wonderful poem, keep writing!

Please do more of this! I really enjoyed it :D

how flippin dare you >:(((
you did get me tho-

q^q am I rly that gullible?

Don't let your mind win. You are an incredible person, and if I can see that from across a screen it must be true. Brains can be annoying and complete buttholes sometimes, but you can't let yours get the best of you.
I wish you the best as you work through this. Keep going, you're worth it.

I really enjoyed this story! I have to admit, I expected that he was crushing on Jessica. But the part where he was stabbed caught me off-guard! There a few grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed. All in all, it was a great read! Keep writing :)

This really spoke to my heart. You did a great job putting these emotions into words. I can't wait to read more of your works!