United States • 18 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
In paragraph 29, I suggest fixing the quotations. I stopped reading right there to let you know, but I love the story so far!
I"m practically in tears! Keep writing, it was beautiful. o(TヘTo)
Omg i can see how you improved!!!
Hey, it's me again! In paragraph 5, you have a quotation mark at the beginning where it's not needed. I personally don't have intrusive thoughts, so I can't say that this has affected me in any way, but I know that this can help others, which is great! Keep writing!
A great illustration of how money isn't everything! Keep writing, you're amazing. <3
Please, dont give up! I enjoy reading and watching your progress and I would absolutely hate myself if one day you were just gone. Please, I'm begging you. I know you can get through this. You just have to stay strong. If you wont do it for yourself, do it for me. Please...