Lyn

In paragraph 29, I suggest fixing the quotations. I stopped reading right there to let you know, but I love the story so far!

I"m practically in tears! Keep writing, it was beautiful. o(TヘTo)

Omg i can see how you improved!!!

Hey, it's me again! In paragraph 5, you have a quotation mark at the beginning where it's not needed. I personally don't have intrusive thoughts, so I can't say that this has affected me in any way, but I know that this can help others, which is great! Keep writing!

A great illustration of how money isn't everything! Keep writing, you're amazing. <3

Please, dont give up! I enjoy reading and watching your progress and I would absolutely hate myself if one day you were just gone. Please, I'm begging you. I know you can get through this. You just have to stay strong. If you wont do it for yourself, do it for me. Please...

I'm so happy for you! Keep writing <3

This really lifted my spirits, thank you so much <3