AaronTheRocker

This may be your first, but is a sure good one.

Whoa...did anyone who read this get reminded of the movie, "The Labyrinth" with David Bowie? I can't be the only one who did.
I like where this is going.

Aww, so adorable. Just filled me right up.😊

Whoa...that took a quick turn towards the end. The idea is pretty gnarly, something different and something new. All you need now is something old, something borrowed and something blue. HA!😅
Great poem.

Hey, can't win them all. Only thing you can do is make the best of what is given.
Sorry that it has come to this after all those strenuous years😞

I can totally relate to this in it's meanings because I'm one of those people who takes time to appreciate everything.
The words are structured in such a way when just spoken with no heavy emotion or changes in tone, it holds value to it.

Preach it girl.
My personal thought, if you ended with a self-statement like, "to make my mark.", I would give you the Italian perfecton gesture (like when food is made just perfect). In all aspect of it though, writing about how hard it is to write is the best way to feel like you did some qualty writing.

Poor guy. Living to know that all the people surrounding you die except for you. I'd say he's a deathtrap so that would make him unlucky.