Yes! The suspense! I love it! I would love this series to continue! Keep up the good work!
I just was shocked at the brilliance of this story. It's just perfect. Keep on writing! You have a talent!
I usually don't like stories like this. But this was beautifully written. I love how you described the boy's battle with himself. Although it made me cry, it was an amazing story. Great job and keep on writing!
Okay, first off, AMAZING story. I'm not exaggerating at all. I love the plot twist, the suspense, the drama! It's great! Two, I read your reply to Oxygen's review. Personally, I don't think there's anything wrong with short stories that are in a series. I'm currently writing a series and so far they've been kind of short. But if you don't make the different stories short then there is no suspense. I feel like this is a super long review but this is a super awesome series! Great job and keep on writing!
Nice story! I love a good romantic love triangle! Very well written except for a few grammar and punctuation mistakes! Keep up the good work!
Very good! More please!
Very good! I especially liked the author's note. A very similar experience happened to me when I was about 7. Keep up the good work!
So sweet and well put together! I love everything about it! Great job!