Reviews Given
I do believe I know where this is going... :)
What the heck, why do you insist on making me cry
This hurts even more than Grief hurt me
Why must you do this
Why must you hurt me in this way
I really like this!
I love the vibe this story gives! Very fairy tale esque, which is a bop. As for the mushrooms, I honestly wouldn't have noticed if not for the other reviews pointing them out. That is to say, I don't have a problem with them, because the focus isn't necessarily the mushrooms, but that she knows about them.
This is just.. Like, it's so weird, and when I first read it, I just kinda thought it was weird abstract stuff, and while I still kinda think that, it's also got a story that I didn't notice before. Basically, what I'm trying to say is that it makes me smile, but also furrow my brow in confusion.
Aw! I really love this!