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Aishlynn is from US United States • 21 y/o

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Lu (Part Three) by Thomas Ray

I think I agree with melissak (again :3). I don't really know what it is though. Something to consider about the dresses is that they might have tried to give her less fancy dresses to help her ease into her new life. Less frills, less poofyness, less lace, but still soft and silky. Also, about how old is Lu?

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A Gift Of Love by Author Unknown

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Two Friends by Thomas Ray

This isn't my first time reading this, but unlike the other times, it really connected to me. I'm not sure if I read the tone right, but it feels (to me) like stating fact. The narrator isn't bemoaning their life, in fact, they occasionally seem morbidly amused. To them, they're stating facts of life, even if it it sad. Anyway, good work.

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Cat - Part 1 by LeCat127

I do believe I know where this is going... :)

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It's Just Who I Am. by why_now

Same.

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My Escape by Annielol399

This is really good. I feel kind of bad for having nothing else to say, but it is really good.

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