LemonSqueez

This was so beautiful. It took my heart down, but in a good way.

I think abortions are okay, but that doesn't mean this is bad writing because it is pretty good and I'm glad you put your opinion/belief out there for everyone to see. Not exactly the easiest thing to do.

I'm not sure what the title means, but damn... this is good.

This was really neat :) I like how you made the storytelling into like a staircase. One step at a time with each conflicting occurrence, it all came together.

I like the change up you put into your writing.

This is neat 👍

Kinda cliche with words and meaning, but it was a good cliche.
Though I think that if you swapped the last three lines to be,

'I vow to be patient and true
to take you as you are

But most of all,
I vow to always love you'

I feel that would send it in a rhythm to have a nice soft ending.