United States • 18 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Wow!That's fantastic
oop, almost clicked report o.O
first time i looked at the tital i thought it said Santas Daughter xD
and wtf happen to Leo (sry if thats wrong, i kinda forgets names after reading :P)
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
*SLAMS PUTER
MORE DANG IT
;0;
he has been revived! guess that item i gave her turned into a revivel device xD
i know how it feels, and i'm here for you :<
ily best friend <3
I enjoyed your story. Well done
You've done a good job of evoking the atmosphere in that kitchen. You used the crossings out well too.
Kinda cliche with words and meaning, but it was a good cliche.
Though I think that if you swapped the last three lines to be,
'I vow to be patient and true
to take you as you are
But most of all,
I vow to always love you'
I feel that would send it in a rhythm to have a nice soft ending.
:(
bruh, i saw this before. I read the first line and was like, NO NO NO NO... pnp
*sNiffLeS