United Kingdom • 64 y/o • MaleReviews Given
Another interesting submission - but take care. It is not good practice to use numerals in prose: numbers should be written in full. Similarly, abbreviations are also not acceptable. Thus, '32' should be written 'thirty-two'. Your computer's spell-check and thesaurus facility will help you to avoid these minor issues in future works.
Another interesting submission - but take care. It is not good practice to use numerals in prose: numbers should be written in full. Similarly, abbreviations are also not acceptable. Thus, '75 mph' should be written 'seventy-five miles per hour'. Your computer's spell-check and thesaurus facility will help you to avoid these minor issues in future works.
This was surprisingly dark and deep. An excellent effort from a very active imagination. I look forward to reading more of your work :-)
Whilst this is an interesting story, there are faults with it. had you used your computer's spell-check and thesaurus facility many of the small errors would have been highlighted for you to correct.
Your stories are good - but take care with your spelling and punctuation.
Simple, cute and effective. Well done!
Very good. This hits home - hard! Poignant and well-written (take care with your punctuation though!). I liked this a lot.
Take care with your spelling and punctuation. It spoils your work.