Bangladesh • 23 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Quite good perception. An epic story.For an young writer its praiseworth.
So deep. No words can express the loss of a loved one. You're an amazing writer!
daymn, i actually cried
Awesomeeeeee🥰ðŸ˜
Sad... but so beautiful. Love conquers all. <3
Wonderful start. I can't wait to see what comes of this. :)
'Thoughts of her would keep me up through the night' reads better than 'her thoughts would...etc.'
Nevertheless its a sharp and disturbing twist in the final lines. You handled that well. You do right in bringing smell as well as sight into your descriptions. Keep writing.
You evoke the battle and your narrator's plight afterwards very well. I guessed the ending before the boy and Jake met up again, yet it still moved me. Well done.