India • 33 y/o • MaleReviews Given
Simple. Riveting. Wonderful.
It has an impact, for sure.
But, several glaring mistakes could be found in this piece.
Kindly get a copy editor in place; every writer needs an editor, remember.
Very interesting idea
Beautifully written poem with good imagery.
Perhaps warning a female that you are not really whom you seem?
Beautifully written
Let's not give ourselves and our fate to an 'idea' that is GOD.
Let us believe in our destiny and more forward in the path which we feel is right
Really well written
Could have exploited the idea much more