I love the last sentence and such a great short story!!! Love it!
I agree with Andy(Formally Apemann) although I think you deserve a 5 star rather than 3 stars. Great job on the story and keep writing!
This is so good! Write more!!!! Love when you said"A dream is a wish made by the heart.' I got so touched. I'm one of those people who love quotes and this is my new favorite!
just saying if you are going for the 100 word story thing this is 101 words but still I love the message!
Yes!!!!! I love it.
This is amazing love the ending and all of the vivid descriptions!