United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Don't listen to Andy. Hes completely and totally wrong,this has a wonderfully beautiful message to tell and I love how you used an egg as an example super creative and brilliant. Keep on writing and don't let mean and untrue comments make you stop writing!(And I get that i'm 11 and someone who most people would call immature and not the best writer but whatever I love your story!) There should be a 6 star because this one deserves 6 not 5 stars!
this is such a cute story I love it!
This is such a sad yet amazing story!
This is a super inspiring story! Great job with it!!!
this is such a sad love story. i love the details but does the girl live by herself and also where are her parents? just wondering where are the guys parents in all of this. just next time include a backstory. but i love this piece of writing! i love the ending and it really completes the story and i love how the man is telling this story to the daughter! keep writing you are amazing at it!!!
This love story is literally better than twilight! All though I would have liked to know more about her back story and maybe more details. But this is so cute!!!
write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yasssssssssssssssss! you must keep writing! there are grammatical issues but there not huge. anyway keep writing i'm literally DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!