India • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
this poem touched my heart , real and deep and i love the rhymes, keep it up
Just wow!
It's good to understand the whole situation from everyone's point of view before coming to a conclusion but I think it was more like a theory explaining the reason behind all the chaos of the world.
Anyway, it's great.
Wow, I like it. It is optimistic and motivational. Keep it up 🙂
About the lawgiver, we have never had any evidence of the existence of God. About what to believe, we should think of the outcome of every action to identify it as good or bad. There has never been any lawgiver, it was always us humans using holy names to fulfill our own greed. I believe if we ever got to hear anything from God, there would have been no crimes.
I personally like this poem, plain words but used in a way that they really touch hearts. The work not only displays your love but also your innocence. Keep it up. And I am really sorry.
Ok, being abnormal is something unique in me. Don't feel bad if you are different from others, you are special. About your thoughts, especially about school, are not at all abnormal. In this era, we children are made to suffer from all this. Anyway, competition is for normal ones. We are special so we just need to concentrate on our goal and certainly, we would do something they all will admire.
A really interesting, simple yet different piece of work; really like it, keep it up
Nice description of the battle of thoughts in mind, very relatable, keep it up