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this was good, i feel like people can really connect to it and that's great. i really liked it.

this is good, i find it slightly empty, lacking emotion. there's emotion in there but as a reader i can't connect to it. it's written well and with a bit more work, it will be great.
don't mean to offend you, so please don't think that. this is just my opinion.

good. the emotion is a little more here this time! like it. keep it up :)

this was a good piece of writing. it expresses a lot of emotion. i liked it quite a lot.

this is really good. i like it and it's relatable. :)

short and sweet. i like it