United States • 4 y/oReviews Received
Miv, this is a really good short story, you've really put it into one nice masterpiece that really fits in really well. Your brilliant word choices, make this short story, really effective and really put a good effect on the reader. Just brilliant. Keep up the good work, and I'll be here to give you 5 stars!
This was amazing! I loved the emotion you put into this. Keep writing like this and you could be a published author! Also, when you write in quotations, start with a capital, even if it's not the beginning of the sentence. Here's an example:
Leo looked off into the distance and whispered, "It's all my fault..."
I hope this helps you in the future! And if you just forgot to, I apologize.
This was great! I loved how you used quotations in the poem as well. I didn't find anything that really stuck out in a bad sense, but then again I'm not very poetic...
I absolutely love your stories! Again, a little pointer...
When you use quotations, make a new paragraph for each person speaking.
other than that, it was absolutely wonderful!
That's pretty funny! I think we all feel that way nowadays. You've brought a smile to my face, so thank you!
That was good, I loved it! keep writing <3