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United States • 4 y/o
"Hi there, I'm Blitz! The "O" is silent."
I really enjoyed your story. Well done.
The "were you disappointed" HIT me in my gut- this was so good to read. Please, please keep writing :)
Really nice! Greed never gets anyone anywhere...
This is great! Luv the rhyme scheme <3
lol this is amazing...though it took a turn i wasn't expecting XD
This poem is not only exciting, but it really MOVES; best poem I've read since 'How they Brought the Good News from Ghent to Aix'!
I really loved your piece of writing. Well done.
I think you're right, that's how they would be treated. It shouldn't be like that but it is.