United States • 4 y/oReviews Received
dude that was really really good!! i love hp...hence my profile name haha
I absolutely love your stories! Again, a little pointer...
When you use quotations, make a new paragraph for each person speaking.
other than that, it was absolutely wonderful!
Prophecy Child certainly has my attention. The mystery is definitely there. Love it so far.
I really enjoyed your story. Well done.
I really enjoyed the second part of your story. Well done.
Nice build up. Just the kind of story that makes you want to look over your shoulder . . . or perhaps not! You know that old adage about what you don't know can't hurt you . . . yeah, right!
Don't . . . Look . . . Back . . . Seriously! --- Well done!
