United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Wise poetry, full of figures of speech.
``Let us hope that she survives her foolishness long enough to become strong enough for the life she has to live?´´
I enjoyed your poem. Well done.
Beautiful! <3
That hook is amazing; right from the first line I felt that I was really drawn into what would be said next. Hooks are something I really struggle with, so I can recognize a really well written one when I see it.
I also just really love it in general. When I read this, it was a little crazy because I was imagining like inspirational music in the background and the ending really showed how the speaker's views had changed. Spectacular!!! <3
I had to read this several times throughout the day cuz I love it soooo much. Idk if other people see it this way, but to me it felt deep, but not unbearably so. Like, it's not overthought, it just is. I really have no other way to explain that. I also really like the rhyming. The scheme wasn't the same exactly, but I feel like where the rhyming words were just made each section really click. Once again, I loveee it! And I can't wait to read more from you!!! :D
omgggg! That ending really got to me... Amazing work!
omg creepyyyy. Is there gonna be another part???
oh my god, this is so eerie!
omg I love the plot and I love everything about this but if you don't mind could you write a nonbinary love story <3