I really like it! You should develope the idea more and then make it longer, this could make a good long story.
It is a great poem, i like the rythm
omg. that must have been so hard for u #digitalhugs
this was great. pretty meaning full
This was a great poem!
It was a really good story!! It was something you didn't have to think about, just had to read.
That's so sad!!!